Well, two things that'd help with that bad start. One atleast use a period after a complete thought.. It doesn't even have to be a correct sentence! Just use one! For the starving African children.. Please!
Number two, if you want people to stop being pissed I'd suggest taking off the orange color. Without periods (or commas), when someone stares at your GINORMOUS wall of text it's almost impossible to read without being completely irritated.
Now if we could fix (we being you) those couple issues, then it'd be brilliant!
On another note.. I hate you Treyarch. You show me trailers of COD 7 saying that it's vietnam! Then you change it so it's all over the damn place. Now I see a freaking AUG shooting through a window on the Xbox dashboard. WTF IS THIS GAME ABOUT?